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Presentation Feedback

Analysis and review feedback

Two out of the three people who answered the question actually liked horror games. They did think that the colour scheme I chose worked with the idea/product and that it worked with the genre, so I won't be changing the colours used for the product. The colours included, black, different greys and white, with red and dark red.

They also said that my fonts I used for the product worked well too, these fonts were called Who Asks Satan, for the title, Simple Chalk for the subtitle and Big Moore for the main text/ the text in the game, so i won't change the fonts either.
I will work on the monsters look more, since one person said they like one of the monsters more than they other, there will be a variety anyway, but i will try and work more on them to make them look better if i can. For one of the feedback's for this question they said i should have the main character on the cover, however they are on the cover, so i already did that. Someone else said they liked the illustrations and liked the idea of having the main character as the focus on the cover and that the monsters are still in the background because it shows significance, so i will use this for the poster or cover.
They do think that the idea fits with the covers/that it does show the idea of the game well, since one person said that the covers are appealing and that it gives a clear demonstration of what the game will involve but doesn't give too much information to the narrative, which is what i want, that way the secrets in the story can stay hidden and shows you the surface/the outside of the game and hides the secrets within the game, like i said before. I might use the design with the main character close up on the monster, that way it shows you a bit of it and then use the monsters surrounding for the cover so you don't notice them as much and shows you the location or i might use the image with the main character close up for the poster and cover, since some game posters show the cover of the game but just add the dates to it.
Some of the answers for how can my designs be improved someone said the letters in the background, the letter crops could be smaller. I agree with that and i will make them smaller and use as the background for the website. For the website idea they want me to add more aesthetics to it, which i was going to do but didn't get round to doing that. One of the other pieces of feedback was the colour of the title and subtitle, using white, since i was going to use black on the poster and i think that the white would work better and stands out more since it's already on a black background, so i will use a white font on the designs for the website, poster and cover, this also help keeps consistency of the colour of the font, which makes it stronger.
Overall, one person said that they fit perfectly, the fonts, colours and designs and another said that the fonts contrast well with the background and i have already used the character in it. Someone else said that they think the fonts and illustrations go really well together and the final design will be a good horror game, so i will change the colour of the font to white and i will change the background of the letter crops to make them smaller and then i will make more monsters, to try and make them look better and when designing, i will try and show the main character more clearly on the designs, rather than having them small on the image and have it like my other design, where they are close up.

Evaluation: 

After the presentation I have decided that I will be using the font i originally going to use the Who Asked Satan font and the Simple Chalk font, this is because they all agreed that my fonts work together and would go with my idea. They also agreed with my colour schemes after i told them about how i wanted it to look with the theme, so it would be black and white with greys and a bit of red and dark red, since those are classic colours for a horror, black and red, so then they agreed that i should use those colour schemes. They said that the design with the character on it would be best so i will be using that design and it shows the main character clearly and shows you an idea of the layout and what might happen in the game.

Link to slides:

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1BrF-U2ivTN62gD9PufuUIugcMLAjrPQsj85tVT9dcUw/edit?usp=sharing

Link to audio file/feedback:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uO2jhdGluJUHmMs-ZFsm-Bsooq6UIorf/view?usp=sharing